Work by Mynda Peyton Beginnings. I'm drawn to beginnings. A string of words that mark the beginning of a line, the silence before sound, the beginning of love and such. All beginnings are like wineintoxicating, heady, and hard. So hard. How do I explain to the folks at the office what my poem's about? When I got back from Miami, I knew the beginning of this poem. I knew I had to write it, capture it, impress my vision before. . . before I forgot it, or forgot why it was so important. Why did I write this poem to her? I don't know, but she is my poem. After I got back from Miami, this poem, or rather the beginning of it, poured out. I've never written a poem before, yet there she sat, so mysterious and incomplete. And there, or rather with it, I'd like to start. worki wear pollutants now because i'm tired, and need a mask to hide blank eyes and dun skin i go into the day, into the day, toward my job now to blue lights and cold coffee and clean white spaces i sink into smiles now and feel normal again. i sain we are part of a team there now and we all know our lines there now lines and the day now is a strait line now a straight line toward white spaces
and i fumble
There, that's the beginning, and no, I don't normally sound like that. Let me explain. Last week I went to Miami. I found myself with extra vacation time and feeling lonely, I decided to go on a little adventure. I packed a few t-shirts, shorts, shades, a bikini and off I flew to Miami. I didn't know what I was looking for, aside from a few sunsets and good Cuban food. Anyway, I went to Miami. . . once i went to miamiwhere all tall buildings are banks near churches with boards for windows i walked along the shore side
and came upon a black man The first few days in Miami
were nice, even the hotel was nice, but that's really unimportant. To
understand this poem you must first understand what happened to me
therenothing
profound mind you, just an event that led me to this poem. Anyway, I'm in
a
park. I don't know its name but it's a park where everything is really
nice and
well-maintained. There are several trees and exotic flowers. A lot of
people
were hanging around, hanging out on permanent vacation, you might say.
They
didn't seem to be too concerned with work, they just sat in the sunshine,
shaded by trees. The sky was so incredibly
blue! And it was quietcity noise was reduced to a background
shooosh.
Most of the people hanging out were lying
on, or wrapped themselves up in, fading tattered blankets. The park
resembled a
picnic of sorts, a not-so-motley festival. Anyway, there was this guy I
couldn't help noticing because he was so unreal, or so real. . . . This
black
guy walked around the park in big circles talking to himself very loudly.
He
looked potentially dangerous. Businessmen near his path carefully
re-directed
their walk, watching his every movement. I watched him too like crazy, I
couldn't help but stare. The thing that
frightened me about him was his eyes. His eyes were crazy and constantly
moving, not at all like normal people's. He kept looking up at the sky,
which
bothered me. Was this guy on drugs? Should he be? toward the hot sidewalks where women with pins through their hair, grey suits and blue tennis shoes speed by.
The city was filled with busy people. You got the sense that there's something really important about to happen at any moment. Everyone seemed so important, and they were all so well-dressed. I felt very out of place walking among so many suits, silk shirts, and briefcases. There are some real fast walkers in Miami, I couldn't keep up. Most of the men had a certain way of pushing ahead, it's the way they moved their bodieseyes forward, shoulders shoved outwardmodern lords of the streets, you might say. It was odd seeing them mix in among the shoppers and store shops. In Miami there are so many shops, all selling cheap radios, fake gold watches, beepers, cellular phones, you name it, stuff I could easily get at home in the mall. Now comes the part about her, she, that nameless woman I wrote this poem about. i sat on a bench and watched a womanbody long body thin tall and brown face empty hair natural. like mine. walking around on hot concrete no shoes. barefooted. under sky homeless in ancient spaces no shoes, under sky. She was this woman I couldn't believe. She was beautiful, in a way, but she was really dirty, and from the look of her clothes she was also homeless, but still healthy-looking, tall, and young. I watched her, wondering, was this performance of some sort, a "happening," you know? Was she on drugs? She had that spaced-out look in her eyes. This woman really affected me, and that confused me. Life felt so absurd. I felt so absurd, shocked by my world whose meaning twists and turns so softly. I felt an urge to follow her, to wander around many weird places behind her. I sat on the bench watching her move past. I felt a compulsion to touch her, greet her, have her greet me. I didn't do any of those things of course. Instead I sat feeling sad and sweet and slow and confused. Who watches reality (not the voice, but the seer. . . the vision that ripples and breaks like water on the face of the world), who is the seer? What makes some people not see what others see, walking around confused, stupidly trying to communicate between two worlds or three worlds or four worlds circling madly in reflection? my sisteri too scream revolution!
I almost got up, but I didn't. I didn't know this woman whose life I was making a romance of. Then I remembered my bus was leaving at 2:00. So I walked back to the station and waited. During the wait she was in my thoughtsnot that I knew anything about her. Mostly I just sat at the station dazed, knowing that something important had happened, clueless as to what it was. I wrote this poem about it, that was the best I could do. I'm amazed at what I wrote now. I'll think about it for around a year. I think I captured some of the moment's tone. You see, I collect things: past moments, washed out intensities. I collect them and put them on paper. I collect bits and pieces, hoping to discover self, hoping to spark a paper revolution. Or at least spend my lunch break trying. Drawing by Sidra. |